Monster

by JP Maloney

Mr. Smith stood in the foreman’s office, thinking only of the day’s carriage ride ahead of him to take the gold from the mine back to the bustling city 60 miles to east. His thoughts were drifting towards his eagerness to get back to his family, and this tempered the strain of the impending journey. He reached for the box containing the gold that sat on the desk of the foreman, soliciting the help of Gonzalez, his partner, to carry the first of the heavy boxes. Walking from the office, he faced down, cautious about loosing his footing, straining under the weight of the gold. The dirt of the street was that last thing Mr. Smith saw. At the very moment that Smith had exited the building Cameron pulled the trigger of his shotgun, liquefying the top of his forehead; Silas fired his revolver dispatching Gonzalez with a shot to the chest.
The twins, Cameron and Silas, then burst into the office firing wildly emptying both their weapons, Silas missed, but the foreman caught Cameron’s buckshot in the chest and neck, causing him to crumple into a pile of increasingly lifeless flesh on the floor, bleeding out over an agonizing half hour.
Cameron dragged the boxes out to the wagon, and with the help of Silas heaved them into the bed. Rushing to exit the area, Silas took the reins, working them hard; while Cameron shot all the horses they rode past, so as to thwart the posse. As they left the mining camp, they could see in the distance the beehive of activity that had become the town. Riding out of yet another robbery, the brothers were fast becoming legends throughout the west.
Once at their hiding place in the canyons, Cameron jumped out and immediately smashed the wooden box upon the ground, dispersing the gold pieces in an arc around the brothers. The sheer amount of gold that they had stolen was more then either of them had seen in their lives. They were in awe. Silas immediately began to pick up the pieces as Cameron walked into the cabin. Stealthily, Silas skimmed thousands of dollars worth of gold off of the three foot pile. Scanning for Cameron, Silas was sure that he was not watching, and would not have seen the pilfering. Greedily Silas went off to stash his “extra” share, returning twenty minutes later with a blank face, and resuming his work retrieving and dividing the mound of gold.
That night Cameron cooked one of the foreman’s legs and fed it to Silas, under the guise that it was pork. Throughout dinner it was conversation as usual, and the generally high spirits maintained from the days successful ventures carried on. Silas kept complementing the delicious meat, and at the end of the meal they sat by the fire pit outside and rolled cigarettes for hours. After splitting a rousing bottle of whisky the brothers went to sleep, Silas knowing nothing of what Cameron had in store.
When he awoke Cameron was awake and cooking breakfast. Silas leisurely walked outside to relive himself, satiated from the meal the night before. When he returned Cameron was gone. All the gold was missing, and the butchered thigh of the foreman was on the table. Overwhelmed and disgusted, Silas searched in vain for Cameron, yet he was nowhere to be found. Then after hours of fruitless searching, Silas realized that Cameron had found out his deception, and fearing that all was lost, he went to check on his pilfered horde.
He rode furiously towards the direction of his hiding place, dismounting and running down the path that led to where he buried the gold. In his haste, he missed out on the fact that Cameron had set a deadfall across the path, and was waiting in the bushes for the very moment that he arrived.
Suddenly Silas felt the weight of a massive log fall square on his shoulders, pinning him to the ground. Writhing was no good, and when Silas realized that he could not overcome the weight of the log he started screaming for help. When it fell the log settled firmly between two rocks, pinning his stomach and right arm to the ground. After an hour Cameron slowly walked down and stood looking at his traitorous brother, and silently drew his shotgun. Silas begged, then screamed, finally breaking down into tears, yet Cameron simply lowered the gun, placed it to his kneecap, and pulled the trigger.
The screaming was ceaseless until Silas passed out, a steady stream of blood saturated the earth below him, and at that point Cameron unburied the gold and rode back to the house. Collecting his possessions he loaded up the wagon, and lit the corner of the roof. He went on to start a new life out in California. The gold he possessed was the only reminder of the life he had lived before; of his past, there was no trace.

The Cowboy’s value as a tool for understanding the unique American cultural identity is unrivaled, showing a facet of the monstrous that we embrace and shun at the same time. The longstanding American fascination with cowboys stems from the interplay between capitalist and Christian ethics. In this struggle for supremacy the cowboy, a creation of society, has become at the most fundamental level a monster that society now tries to tame, its very notion threatening. In the context of validating the idea behind my creation of literary drivel I sadly call a work of literature, I will put forth in this essay a defense of the cowboy as monstrous in general, and in doing so discuss the significance of the cowboy as a tool for societal and literary criticism. The examples henceforth will come from authors who, unlike myself, created something original that in the context of their times say more about the cowboy as a monster, topics that my piece only superficially demonstrates.


By looking at Ishmael Reed’s postmodern cowboy novel Yellow Back Radio Broke-Down as a criticism of the western and its relation to American culture, we see the cowboy as what he has come to represent in his most basic sense. Reed’s very choice of characters, taken alone, shows how the cowboy in values and actions is the devil himself, and his nemesis the evil rancher is the opposing force of civilization as Christian society. The main character, the Loop Garoo Kid, is a “cleft foot” “hoodoo cowboy” (Reed 1). He is in literal terms the devil. Reed says of his origins, Booted out of his father’s house after a quarrel, whores snapped at his heels and trick dogs did the fandango on his belly… Born with a caul over his face and ghost lobes on his ears, he was a mean night tripper who mover from town to town quoting Thomas Jefferson and allowing bandits to build a flophouse around his genius (Reed 1).

This devil in the flesh with his affinity for quoting dead American presidents is the typical cowboy. The values that he holds in esteem are those of capitalism, and collective individualisim, his society constructed in a concurrent fashion to that of Sartre’s. His very actions assign value, characterizing his choices as good simply because he has chosen them. This differs drastically when compared with the values held by society, in which moral behavior is determined by referencing an a priori absolute. The entire story shows the cowboy and his struggle with American society. By associating Loop with the Thomas Jefferson, he is in effect saying that the values of the cowboys are those values that America was founded on. The notoriously effeminate Drag Gibson, the evil rancher yells in his drunken rage “You want to abandon American institutions, huh! When you give up your institutions, you ain’t got nothing someone once said. Get back here and watch this good old killing. Make em get up their hands, boys” (Reed 169). This quote is also revealing of the institutions that the cowboy disregards, which are those of social control by an elite few, and they highlight the contradictions both moral and abstract that society has allowed Americans to get away with. Cohen’s idea that “the monster notoriously appears at times of crisis as a kind of third term that problematizes the clash of extremes—as “that which questions binary thinking and introduces a crisis”” is extremely befitting in its application to the categorizing of cowboys as monsters; the only criticism being that cowboys only become the third term in their move from real human beings to the abstract concept of new wave counter-societal unrest (Cohen 6).

The cowboy in his time represented an agent of American imperialism, and in effect was a physical embodiment of capitalism. Sent out to tame the west, he simply paved the way for society to move out, but in doing that created a culture of violence and individualism that in itself had to be stamped out before the west was truly civilized. The initial creation of society was immeasurably transmogrified by the conditions and the events that took place in these societal margins. Thus, his very surroundings transformed the nature of the cowboy from Cooper’s Natty Bumpo to Reed’s Loop. The cowboy did not eliminate the savage and monstrous Indian; he became one and in his triumph became even more monstrous. Society’s response to the cowboy has been mixed, initially resulting in literature and myths dedicated to explaining and rationalizing his nature so as to once again bring it back under the wing of society. At first he was embraced as man in his natural element; his backdrop being a moralized idyllic nature. This view is seen in Cooper’s works, as well as in Owen Wister’s the Virginian, of the cowboy as a moral agent of something superior, a clean virginal state of humanity.

There was a point where this image was all that was seen, and from this initial work, authors like Louis L’Amour sprang forth and filled Americans heads with images of a romanticized view of the cowboy. Yet even these views illustrated, and in their brief societal rationalizations, confirmed that the ease and manner in which human life was taken had no bearing in a Christian society.

From this initial image, when the true nature of the west was realized we begin to see the changing face of the cowboy, in society’s fascination, and condemning of Jesse James and Billy the Kid. While traditionally evil people who killed for their own unadulterated profit, society then tamed them by placing them next to the increasingly savage Indian. Even in cases such as the aforementioned outlaws, the motivations for their actions were never questioned, and unless the stories containing them spoke of their demise at the hand of a moral sheriff, they were simply grouped in with the general category of cowboys; their actions concurrent with those seen in the eradication of the Indian. As a well-used method for the rationalization of the state of the cowboy, the idea at the time was to skew the notion of the Indian, and reissue his image, not as the noble savage, but as the treacherous, lecherous, and generally evil savage in the most derogatory sense of the word. Using the Indian as a mode of comparison, any action of the cowboy was acceptable by comparison; the cowboy becoming an agent of society and his violence necessary for survival. As Cohen so lucidly states, “representing an anterior culture as monstrous justifies its displacement or extermination by rendering the act heroic” (Cohen 7).

Thus in an effort to mediate the divisive and “monstrous” effect of the cowboy on society, society itself has tried in vain to redefine the nature of our perception of the cowboy. Thus, the image of the Lone Ranger was created. The Lone Ranger was society in a cowboy suit, and his very actions reinforced the view that he was fundamentally different. His strict code of morals, placed impracticality at the forefront, his honor and Christian virtue being his motivator. The unfounded irrational idea that in a godless state man by nature chooses the values accepted by Christianity drives this point home even more. It is with the arrival of the cowboy film that we see the cowboy metastasize into what we see him as today: the lone individual related to others only by his very humanness, and the fact that he is rational then gives his actions however contrary they are, meaning.

In choosing a cowboy film to speak on I must preface it with the fact that I am portraying a view of the cowboy as monstrous based on the judgments made in a Christian society. That being said, for this purpose some films work better then others, and in my willful disregard of some, it is not that they contradict my hypothesis, but merely classic films such as high noon speak more to the condition and fate of the cowboy then they do to the cowboy himself. Sam Peckinpah’s The Wild Bunch in without a doubt the seminal modern cowboy film, and its portrayal of the cowboy show that while still human, there is something separate in the character of the cowboy that distinguishes him from the everyday man. The foremost would be his propensity towards violence. Davis states in Playing Cowboys that there are two main theses that define the allure of the myth of the cowboy, one of them is the “Rambo thesis, which recognizes the central position of the gunfighter in the Western myth, serves as an outlet and encourages the audiences aggressive instincts in a way not permitted or encouraged in contemporary society” (Davis xx). Thus, in The Wild Bunch the very allure that the movie creates is that one can define his life in a blood-spattered blur of domination and violence, and this then brings forth his second thesis. The root of the second thesis draws heavily upon Fiedler’s stance in Love and Death in the American Novel. In his final chapter he delves into dissection of the themes that define Twain’s Huckleberry Finn seizing as its main triumph the idea that the reader is left with the idea that Huck is never civilized, and has exerted his will in rebelling second thesis: “by presenting an almost exclusively male world, this argues, the western allows characters and readers to escape from a society dominated by feminine social and religious values” (Davis xviii). While one may feel the topic has diverged from what defines cowboys as monstrous, the very exploration of the nature of the cowboy myth once explained shows that it is not only is the idea of the cowboy that is contrary to society, cowboys themselves are fundamentally immoral in a Christian sense. This drastic split from society would define them as monsters of a most basic type, but it is the fact that they create a desire within us to realize ourselves as a cowboy, which makes them truly monstrous.


Many of Cohen’s seven theses can be applied to this interpretation of the cowboy as a monster. “The monster is the harbinger of category crisis” fits well when evaluating the cowboy, as the changing face of the cowboy in literature has yet to classify the cowboy in any sense except that he is a marginal character who embraces absolute freedom. When trying to rationalize the violent actions of the cowboy, society falls short; the very idea of the cowboy makes his appearance almost universal.
Cohen also speaks of “monsters born of political expedience and self justifying nationalism function as living invitations to action” (Cohen 13). Thus in creating the cowboy as a tool to realize our Manifest Destiny, the government created something that transformed over time in reality and in literature into something almost always at odds with society. What makes this dangerous is when we apply Cohen’s idea that our “fear of the monster is really a kind of desire” (Cohen 17). Cohen states, “Through the body of the monster fantasies of aggression, domination, and inversion are allowed safe expression in a clearly delimited and permanently liminal space. Escapist delight gives way to horror only when the monster threatens to overstep these boundaries” (Cohen 17). Thus while Douglas would define the cowboy as monstrous due to his marginal state, Cohen would say he is monstrous because he is encroaching on culture. They are both correct. While the west is no longer uncivilized, the modern cowboy can be seen in situations where there is little regulation. Drug dealers (especially murderous ones), motorcycle and plain gang members are the cowboys of today. They have little regard for human life, their needs being first and foremost. They live outside of society, always on the outskirts, and to some are idols, to others monsters. Take Fifty-Cent, millions of people embrace and attribute positive meaning to his time as a crack dealer and a pimp by buying his records; now that he is in society he is no longer the cowboy, but they are buying the image of the thug that he was, not the musician that he is. Thus in this interplay between the cowboy in society and the cowboy on the margins, the cowboy himself embodies qualities that Kristeva would consider “abject,” and as she explains, that “primal space between fear and attraction” is itself monstrous (Cohen 19).


In my short story, I include the elements that make the mythic cowboy monstrous, as well qualities that define monsters in general. First and foremost, the twins live in a marginal state, taking up residence in a hidden canyon. Secondly the ease with which they kill, both committing the physical act and in mentally dealing with it, shows how removed from society they are. The fact that they are twins, and that they come to a final showdown is monstrous, as Freud would argue that the double is inherently uncanny, and horrific. Finally, I include a line that speaks to their becoming legends throughout the west, meaning that regardless of what happens next they will be remembered, and some will idolize them, ensuring that more like them will be created.
Thus, the cowboy rides off into the monstrous, again reaffirming the notion that he bucks American society’s efforts to tame him. Even now that the frontier has closed, the cowboy has remained, and we see him all the time, society’s reactions now being the same that they were at in the nineteenth century: condemning and fearful.

Bibliography
Aquila, Richard. Wanted Dead or Alive: The American West in Popular Culture. Chicago: University of Illinois Press, 1996. Aquila’s book examines the cowboy in pop culture and provides a good background for speaking on the subject, as well as putting a different spin on Davis’s interpretation of “The Wild Bunch.”
Cohen, Jeffery J. Monster Culture (Seven Thesis). Minneapolis: University of Minnesota Press, 1996. Cohen’s work allowed me to critically evaluate the cowboy as a monster, and provides a good description of that which is monstrous in itself, and in relation to culture.
Davis, Robert M. Playing Cowboys: Low Culture and Art in the Western. Norman: University of Oklahoma Press, 1992. Davis’s book is a study of the form and content of works involving the cowboy. His book helps define the western myth.
Douglas, Mary. Purity and Danger: An Analysis of the Concepts of Pollution and Taboo. London: Routledge, 1966. Douglas outlines a theory in which that which is marginal is seen as monstrous. This can be applied to define cowboys as monstrous.
Feidler, Leslie A. Love and Death in the American Novel. New York: Criterion Books, 1960. Fielder’s book speaks to anti-societal urges that promote our fascination with the cowboy. This defines cowboys as something outside of society, and hence leads to their classification as monstrous.
Freud, Sigmund. Writings on Art and Literature. Stanford: Stanford University Press, 1997. Freud’s concept of the uncanny allows my story to take on another level of monstrousness, and in its application shows the monstrous nature of the relation between my characters.
Kristeva, Julia. The Powers of Horror: An Essay On Abjection. New York: Columbia University Press, 1982. In outlining the concept of the abject, Kristeva’s notions can be applied to the characterization of the cowboy as monstrous.
Peckinpah, Samuel. “The Wild Bunch.” 1969. This movie portrays an image of the cowboy that is both realistic and frightening, and exhibits well defined monstrous qualities.
Reed, Ismael. Yellow Back Radio Broke-Down. New York: Doubleday & Company, Inc., 1969. Reed’s book is both a novel, and a work of criticism that helps to define the nature of the cowboy, and in his opinion, the cowboy is monstrous, or devilish.
Wright, William. Six Guns and Society: A Structural Study of the Western. Berkeley: University of California Press. In this book Wright adds his own opinions to the interpretation of modern western films, building up a broader base of knowledge off which to base my theories.

 

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